Mp Designs
MilitaryPolice
Join Date: 2003-10-12 Member: 21623Members
<div class="IPBDescription">Thread for my concept and designs</div> <img src='http://img4.photobucket.com/albums/0803/manny/Shunter.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
Well first of all I gotta say thanx Esuna because without your criticism of my older concept, I wouldnt realize how plain crappy it was.
Now I've greatly improve the handle and I've learned a few more things about PS.
Im gonna make a few more changes because I'm not close to finishing it yet.
I just realized the pen tool can make curves so im gonna erase a few curves i made using the line tool.
Im gonna give it a TSA color theme to it. I was just experimenting with making a metal looking skin.
Gonna fix the handle some more and remove the scope.
Heres wut I got so far:
<img src='http://img4.photobucket.com/albums/0803/manny/Shunterv2_5.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
c&c appreciated, even if it sounds mean, its probably for my own good <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Well first of all I gotta say thanx Esuna because without your criticism of my older concept, I wouldnt realize how plain crappy it was.
Now I've greatly improve the handle and I've learned a few more things about PS.
Im gonna make a few more changes because I'm not close to finishing it yet.
I just realized the pen tool can make curves so im gonna erase a few curves i made using the line tool.
Im gonna give it a TSA color theme to it. I was just experimenting with making a metal looking skin.
Gonna fix the handle some more and remove the scope.
Heres wut I got so far:
<img src='http://img4.photobucket.com/albums/0803/manny/Shunterv2_5.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
c&c appreciated, even if it sounds mean, its probably for my own good <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Comments
Just:
-The scope doesnt seem attached
-It would probably look better without the scope
The second one's grip looks like you'd get your thumb wrenched in there really easily.
<span style='color:red'><span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>NO SCOPES</span></span>
but maybe add some kinda grip on it.. on the...
==/^^^^ <- the gunny, yeh, you got the point
==/^^/^^ <-- a second grip thugy, allmsot like a clip
it feels kinda like a rifel atm
oh, fore the skin, how about addinga a few "gorg" signs or so, showing he shot a gorg... heartless bastrd <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Anyways i know the first one is crap, i just posted it to show you guys how I improved it over.
Im still trying to learn how to properly use the pen tool, after that ill redo the handle, and ill make the front grip bigger, and remove the scope.
Would you guys think its ugly if i add a famas looking handle instead?
*update!!11one1* <!--emo&::marine::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/marine.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='marine.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Edit: WTH is that line doing there? eerr... ok.. just pretend it aint there <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Yes it can...just painfully.
If image doesnt work go here: <a href='http://img4.<font color="white">Photobucket is being filtered thanks to a recent rager attack. Sorry for all inconveniences.</color>0803/manny/Artwork/Scan0005.jpg' target='_blank'>Sketch</a>
Not NS art, but instead of creating lots of threads I'm just gonna post my artwork here as it is entitled MP designs and not limited to anything.
C&C appreciated, just dont nuke me <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
/edit nvm theres a probleme with my image host, sorry guys <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
sorry for makin fun of it