Emphasize Comic - Issue.1 (the Tryout)

Xinoz0r-DKXinoz0r-DK Join Date: 2004-03-04 Member: 27121Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">:D</div> hey all....
its been a while since i've posted anything in here <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> but my time has come! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> my latest work: a web comic based on my new ns clan <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
What do ya think?

<img src='http://www.emphasize.dk/tegneserie/issue1.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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  • HydraHydra Join Date: 2003-06-14 Member: 17366Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    lol I like it, amusing, but I can't really say I have experience in judging comics, I only read em. =)
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  • GlissGliss Join Date: 2003-03-23 Member: 14800Members, Constellation, NS2 Map Tester
    I don't get it
    ):
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  • Scorpion571Scorpion571 Join Date: 2002-11-24 Member: 9800Members
    I think-

    Maybe it's-

    It could be-

    Hmm.. I don't get it either. <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • RetalesRetales Panigg cultist Join Date: 2003-08-07 Member: 19180Members
    Dont you see? It's a new recruit... He has to fight a space cow... And he wins... and... umm...

    I like your style, though <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • jumpingjodajumpingjoda Join Date: 2003-12-14 Member: 24367Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    oh god cant you see? he got milk in the last pic...
    beat the cow... milk...
    you humorles bunch <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    damn, this happens when kids grow up in the city... "no dear, the milk is coming from the cow, not from the super market!"
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  • brute_forcebrute_force Join Date: 2003-10-04 Member: 21433Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-jumpingjoda+Jun 8 2004, 01:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (jumpingjoda @ Jun 8 2004, 01:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> oh god cant you see? he got milk in the last pic...
    beat the cow... milk...
    you humorles bunch <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    damn, this happens when kids grow up in the city... "no dear, the milk is coming from the cow, not from the super market!" <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Dude, I thought that was a marker. <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • Xinoz0r-DKXinoz0r-DK Join Date: 2004-03-04 Member: 27121Members
    lol.... sry.... should've made the "milk" text abit larger.... u're right.... u cant read it...

    but... else... thx for the critiq <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • jumpingjodajumpingjoda Join Date: 2003-12-14 Member: 24367Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    i must have then some nice pair of shiny eagle eyes <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/nerd.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    The "X" is gone from his helmet in the last shot. And what's the skin hole hanging from his jaw?
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  • POOP_AkiraPOOP_Akira Join Date: 2003-11-23 Member: 23468Members
    That would be his mouth, moving due to the words coming out of it.
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  • panda_de_malheureuxpanda_de_malheureux Join Date: 2003-12-26 Member: 24775Members
    edited June 2004
    I say change the milk bottle to a knife and have a caption: "TSA - Knives so bs you've just got to love em".

    I also have a couple more suggestions but they will most likely disincourage you so I will keep my mouth shut.

    Oh and I love the detail and everything, great job.
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  • AkalamanaiaAkalamanaia Join Date: 2003-01-04 Member: 11833Members
    Nice comic! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-jumpingjoda+Jun 8 2004, 12:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (jumpingjoda @ Jun 8 2004, 12:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> oh god cant you see? he got milk in the last pic...
    beat the cow... milk...
    you humorles bunch <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    damn, this happens when kids grow up in the city... "no dear, the milk is coming from the cow, not from the super market!" <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    That's a male cow. Note the horns.

    So why, exactly does he have milk? Unless.... oh god no......... >_<
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  • ZerogreatZerogreat Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10537Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-esuna+Jun 9 2004, 12:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (esuna @ Jun 9 2004, 12:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> That's a male cow. Note the horns. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Have you ever seen a cow in your life? All cows have horns. Althru male cows have alot bigger horns.
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  • ZerogreatZerogreat Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10537Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-jumpingjoda+Jun 8 2004, 09:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (jumpingjoda @ Jun 8 2004, 09:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> i must have then some nice pair of shiny eagle eyes <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/nerd.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Well, i see sharply things up to distance of about 50 cm without glasses, but i saw the MILK on the milk box wothout problems <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • ZerogreatZerogreat Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10537Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-<[POOP]> Akira+Jun 9 2004, 02:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (<[POOP]> Akira @ Jun 9 2004, 02:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> That would be his mouth, moving due to the words coming out of it. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Well, i wondered about this too, his mouth is the line at the place...where mouth should be. So i do not know what is it.
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  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-Zerogreat+Jun 9 2004, 01:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Zerogreat @ Jun 9 2004, 01:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-esuna+Jun 9 2004, 12:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (esuna @ Jun 9 2004, 12:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> That's a male cow. Note the horns. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Have you ever seen a cow in your life? All cows have horns. Althru male cows have alot bigger horns. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    <a href='http://www.kountrylife.com/gallery/jersey.gif' target='_blank'>Some</a> <a href='http://www.c-science.com/txt/images/1999/990704tefa.jpg' target='_blank'>cows</a> <a href='http://www.raincliffe.n-yorks.sch.uk/homework/Geography/Geography/Yr8/Year_8_Geography/Thorn%20Park%20Farm/thorn_sep_2000/cows_15_acre.jpg' target='_blank'>wish</a> <a href='http://marian.creighton.edu/~conradm/cow.jpg' target='_blank'>to</a> <a href='http://www.hatchs.com/images/P6021035.jpg' target='_blank'>disagree</a>.

    And yes, all cows have horns, but most domesticated female (Those used in dairy farming) have little to no visible horns. Generally the males (Especially fully grown adults, bulls) have larger, visible horns. Given the size of those in the drawing, coupled with how the cow has been drawn, it is quite obvious he's male.

    And no, i've never seen a cow in real life, my grandfather only owned a farm for the sole reason of hiding it from me. *rolls eyes*
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  • SgtFurySgtFury Join Date: 2003-02-07 Member: 13219Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->(Zerogreat @ Jun 9 2004, 08:28AM) Well, i wondered about this too, his mouth is the line at the place...where mouth should be. So i do not know what is it. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    I think that line is his nose <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • CMEastCMEast Join Date: 2002-05-19 Member: 632Members
    I prefer to think it male... otherwise its promoting violence against the fairer sex (lets not think about what it promotes if its a male, all I can say is theres much nicer ways to get a bit of cream in your coffee).
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  • jumpingjodajumpingjoda Join Date: 2003-12-14 Member: 24367Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    dont think too much about it, its art !
    so: its a cow, last pic ---> milk ... thats enough <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    it IS good <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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