ThunderShock27
Yo. I'm a writer. I write things. What about? Videogames. Where? Videogame forums. Where am I currently writing? Subnautica general discussion forum. What is the meaning of life? Hmm, now wouldn't you like to know?
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Chapter 22: A Floating Island
Jeff had been sleepily heading back to his pod. He remembered that not too many hours ago he had washed his hands of that claustrophobic tin-can and yet now, he was forced to return to its safety. His… -
Ok, I'm so sorry guys! I've been really distracted lately. When I wasn't busy with life things, I've been devoting a lot of my time on the subnautica forums to reading Bugzapper's 'Aurora Falls' and 'Borealis Rising'. I hope none of you think I've l…
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Whoa... Amazing story... I can't believe I'm caught up already! I very excitedly look forward to the next installments in the story! Great work @Bugzapper . You have set…
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*Gasps* WHOA! Oh, goodness. Thank you Bumpasaurus for waking me up! Don't worry! Stuff still on the way!
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Chapter 21: Motivation
Jeff couldn't quite tell how he felt. His mind was swirling with negative thoughts and emotions. Depression, anger, grief, confusion. He steadily became more and more depressed and grief stricken. Every time… -
Chapter 20: Touch Down
Palmer's head snapped up from where it had been hanging loosely from his shoulders as the echo of a distant explosion jolted him awake. His slumped body became rigid again and his limp legs steadied themselv… -
^ Yeah probably.
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Chapter 19: Evasive Action
"Alright you're sure you're confident with the landing protocol?"
"Yes sir! It'll be a breeze."
"Alright, I sure hope so Westly."
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Chapter 18: The Structure
The trip was fairly uneventful. The path between the pod and the waypoint mostly consisted of kelp forest which eased Jeff's mind. He had traveled most of the distance and was approaching fast. With a twi… -
Chapter 17: Convergence
Jeff had gotten very little sleep. He woke up quite early to begin preparations getting no more than about 4 hours of sleep. That is, if you call tossing and turning all night on the cold hard floor of a li… -
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I knew this day would come... I wasn't prepared enough.(Quote)
Wh- ah- bwa- I'm- Wa- I would nev- of- cou- Yes. XD(Sorry for the late entry! I've been quite busy lately. Rest assured though, I have not abandoned you!)
Chapter 16: Last Minute Shopping
"These coordinates are quite a distance... I need to scour what I can from the A…(Quote)
Your heart has been somewhat spared my friend
... For now. Chapter 15: Making Orbit
"Aurora, it's Sunbeam. We've made orbit, and scans have found a landing site on the planet that's only rated hazardous. It's our best shot. We've sent you the coordinates. We'll be there in two days' time.…Chapter 14: Pressing On
There was so much... So much blood. No sign of any human remains, just blood, blood everywhere, splattered on the wall and pooling on the ground. The floor was crawling with strange four legged crab creatur…Chapter 13: Desolate Halls
Jeff floored it. The seamoth jolted forward and closed the distance to the deck in seconds. Jeff turned at the last second ramming the side of the seamoth into the partially submerged deck and he frantic…@Skope Ha Ha! Exactly! Lol(Quote)
Yeah! I plan to continue all the way through the story of Subnautica. Please forgive me if I skip a lot of the grindy stuff though. As you may have noticed Jeff tends to just kinda have all the materials he needs because I typicall…(Quote)
I haven't read the Aurora Falls yet. I honestly didn't know it existed until a while ago but in the reading of the Borealis I had suspected that he had done a previous story. I will certainly try to go back and read that after I ca…Chapter 12: The Bow
As Jeff got closer to the Aurora, another pang of sadness gripped his mind. He remembered the first time he saw the Aurora, it's majestic form and shimmering hull. A symbol of Alterra's goals as a corporation o…(Quote)
I'm fairly new to the Subnautica forums so I hadn't read any of bugzapper's content, but I just recently started reading his 'Borealis Rising' story and holy heck words! His writing is phenomenal and filled with a level of detail a…Chapter 11: Auxiliary Mission
The sun had set and Jeff had a very restless sleep as the pod gently sloshed up and down and side to side on the small waves. The pod didn't have any bedding so Jeff was forced to sleep on the floor. …(Quote)
I wanted there to be some high steaks for the Sunbeam crew to show how sacrificial they were for the sake of anyone on 4546B and so jettisoning 4 years worth of work is what I came up with. I was also having trouble logicing out a …Chapter 10: No Going Back
"Sunbeam, broadcasting to all survivors of the Aurora. We've covered more than half the distance, so hold on in there.
We're scanning the planet for dry land as we speak. You couldn't have pic…(Quote)
Well being an engineer, I wouldn't be surprised if he isn't as knowledgeable of ocean biology. Luckily for him, it was a safe assumption. Let's just hope he doesn't make assumptions like that when it comes to the sea dragon or reap…Chapter 9: Life-Pod 7
Jeff gasped at the sight of such a massive creature. Larger than a humpback whale. Tentacles extended from its rear and its massive blue and black body hulked toward him letting out another loud grumble. As J…
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