ThunderShock27
Yo. I'm a writer. I write things. What about? Videogames. Where? Videogame forums. Where am I currently writing? Subnautica general discussion forum. What is the meaning of life? Hmm, now wouldn't you like to know?
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I am not offended my friend! I simply think you're trying to nitpick on something and blowing it way out of proportion. You said that the amount of people on board the Aurora is why there's only 1 or 2 survivors, but you're assuming the un-assumable…
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Let me clear up some things. When I was doing research for how many crew members were on the Aurora (since I failed to see the PDA that said the actual count), I looked up the closest real world relative to the Aurora: Aircraft carriers. The largest…
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The radar has a very limited range. The reaper saw them before it was in range and by the time it had shown up on the radar, the reaper had already built up tremendous speed. That's why Jeff's job was so important. The cams gave hi… -
Chapter 34: Battle Hardened
Jeff's heart skipped a beat and he lost his breath. The final tear drained from his eye and clarity returned. A chill shot through his whole body and he felt the adrenaline explode in his core.Chapter 33: Detour
Jeff rose up on the freight elevator with a few boxes at his feet. Determination was docked above his head to a special docking collar they had made specifically to connect the ship directly to their base via th…Chapter 32: Determination
It took a might longer than either of them initially expected before they were finally able to generate an acceptable Cyclops schematic with the various fragments they were able to find.
"Basi…@Kubazet99 Populace means the people living in a particular country or area. It's a word similar to Population, Inhabitants, or Residence. In the case I used it in, Pop…Chapter 31: New Objective
"What do they mean 'infected'?" Palmer asked as Jeff wrapped a bandage around his arm.
They were still in the control room of the gun facility.
"I'm not sure... Do they consider h…*Hears a distant 'wake up' by kubazet99 and rolls over*
*Hears Navi..................Goes insane, runs away from home, and is never heard from again*
*Wakes up from the dream, realizes people are worried that I'm gone...*
Seeing 'confusing' being the only comment you've gotten so far, just really made me wanna comment to say this is good! Some real potential here. I look forward to seeing how you continue in the first chapter!Chapter 30: Time, a Limited Resource
Jeff felt cold. This strange chill seemed to only effect one side of his body and no matter how he tried, he couldn't move to escape it. All was dark and though he tried to strain his vision to…@kubazet99 Yeah, I've seen that video. As you might imagine I've had to do A TON of research to make sure I don't accidentally miss something important in the cannon of …Chapter 29: Knock Knock
Jeff once again stood at the doorway of the giant alien gun facility. It had been a few weeks since the "adventure" in the jelly shroom cave. A week predominantly filled with bedrest and boredom for Jeff wh…(Quote)
Thankyou so much. That means so much to me. That was my motivation initially: to make a story that followed the cannon events of the game and maybe throw a few twists into it. I thought the game's story was already quite intricate …@Kubazet99 That's actually quite helpful. Thanks for the reminder!
@FlashWoolFumble Thanks for the bump!Chapter 28: Base 2
Palmer looked in the direction Jeff was aiming his seamoth. Not too far away from them, on the seafloor nearby more of the magma vents, stood what appeared to be a very old Alterra grade thermal reactor. It was…Chapter 27: Trapped
Palmer frantically glanced over the seamoth console and his surroundings.
"What do I do! There's no offensive or defensive systems installed in this thing!"
He gripped the yoke and…Chapter 26: Jelly and Blood
After the completion of the base, the duo decided to name their home Reefback Refuge, or R&R for short. A week had passed since the christening of Talon and Stingray, a week primarily filled with re…Nice work @FlashWoolFumble ! I actually built a base there as a point of reference for my last entry and I'll tell you right now, you basically created exactly wha…(Quote)
Dude those are nice!
They didn't initially have meanings, but now that u mention it, the color sch… Chapter 25: Talon and Stingray
Once Jeff and Palmer got down to business, things went quite smoothly. Dismantling both observation pods on the island took several hours and several trips back and forth to Lifepod 37. At the end, t…(Quote)
They could, but then you must wonder: How long would it be before a reaper decided to saunter right into the grand reef biome and take a bite out of their base? Those mandibles are designed for death and destruction. The current fa…Thank you all for helping me reach 3.2k readers! This story has really grown into something really special to me and I'm so happy you all are enjoying it!
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Comment by ThunderShock27
May 2017
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This whole story is being written as I go, not pre'fabricated' (haha puns), using the game's lore as the main timeline. I thought it would be a great idea because, while strictly following the subnautica lore right on the dot might…Chapter 24: Companionship
"You're alive?!" they both said semi-simultaneously.
"Are you ok?!" Palmer called.
"Yeah I'm, pretty ok, much better now seeing you alive! You?"
"Things are going prett…Sorry for the long wait guys! I hope these last two entries rekindle your fires of curiosity and intrigue!Chapter 23: Someone else
The night had been cold as Palmer had expected. His survival PDA indicated the temperature was around 13 degrees Celsius. Not too cold, but uncomfortable enough to warrant a fire. During the night, he had …
