Just A Game...

Rapier7Rapier7 Join Date: 2004-02-05 Member: 26108Members
edited February 2005 in Fan-Fiction Forum
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Being revised. Admin can delete if they like.
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  • lolfighterlolfighter Snark, Dire Join Date: 2003-04-20 Member: 15693Members
    Ooooooh, surprise ending! Me like.

    It's like stomping an ant hill: What is but play to you is suffering and death to others.
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  • BadMouthBadMouth It ceases to be exclusive when you can have a custom member titl Join Date: 2004-05-21 Member: 28815Members
    good enuf story. i really liked the prelude to the action. there is some character development there. your story is very military style-like, using military terms and all. like that as it adds to atmosphere. but i somehow don't feel the intensity during the action.

    so sad that jaeger died. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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