Return Of Dark Harbinger

RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
edited June 2005 in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">Still worth the effort?</div> edited

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  • hidden_snperhidden_snper Join Date: 2004-03-18 Member: 27412Members
    Really nice story, WRITE MORE! your style is good and i like your ideas about the TSA.
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    edited June 2005
  • john_sheujohn_sheu Join Date: 2004-02-26 Member: 26917Members
    F**k yeah, post 'em all! Finally a story by an author who values grammar and spelling as much as I do <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    But yes, it is very well written; I would think it is eminently publishable.
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    edited June 2005
  • john_sheujohn_sheu Join Date: 2004-02-26 Member: 26917Members
    Nice, I have two questions though:
    1. I think the bit about "forcing" Frontiersmen to use the on-board sludge seems a bit contrived.
    2. Whatever happend to FriendlyFire?

    Keep up the writing!
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    1. There not so much being "forced" to use the res towers on the ship, as Marcus is angry at how the TSA goes about their administation. There are a number of references in the official backstory/info that indicate the TSA is less than angelic in doing what it does.

    2. Are you suggesting that Marcus should have shot his squad member, because the skulk attacked him?
  • NuubNuub Join Date: 2004-01-05 Member: 25059Members
    I think he was referring to the thing on Frontiersmen manual. That the nanos stop the bullets for hitting friendlies.
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    Ah, I completely forgot about that, but orginally that situation was drawn from an addendum to the FriendlyFire reference,

    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->In rare cases nano-gridlock has been known to interfere with this protection for the duration of a battle. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->



    Ratfire
  • Thats_EnoughThats_Enough USA Join Date: 2004-03-04 Member: 27141Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    waiting for more!!!

    good writing so far <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> keep it up
  • meatballmeatball Join Date: 2003-05-10 Member: 16196Members
    Great story, give us the rest <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    edited June 2005
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    wewt, it's always worth it to continue a story
  • NuubNuub Join Date: 2004-01-05 Member: 25059Members
  • john_sheujohn_sheu Join Date: 2004-02-26 Member: 26917Members
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    Yeah I'm working on the next few chapters, they tend to come together in pieces and get finished separately. Sorry it takes so long <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo--> but I like to think that it adds some quality. The whole process has been an inspirational spurt, I started writing this story about a year and a half ago as TAK can tell you. At the time he had a quest going to have his name on the last respondant for every single post in this forum <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Thanks for your interest it's really inspiring!


    Ratfire
  • brute_forcebrute_force Join Date: 2003-10-04 Member: 21433Members, Constellation
    I like this story. Please continue <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • Thats_EnoughThats_Enough USA Join Date: 2004-03-04 Member: 27141Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    edited May 2004
    Addendum to the above post, I probably won't be posting anything for at least a few days, finals are coming up and that's a lot of studying. Also, I'm trying to make all the chapters, including the unpublished ones a little longer for a better read.
    So if anyone has any ideas or corrections, I'd be glad to see them.
    Thanks.


    Ratfire
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    edited June 2005
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    Woot forums back online! I'm still working on DH, but the goings are very slow, lots of RL events happening right now. Thanks to everyone who drops me feedback.
  • BadMouthBadMouth It ceases to be exclusive when you can have a custom member titl Join Date: 2004-05-21 Member: 28815Members
    im just wondering, how long does it take for u to wirte one chapter?
  • RatfireRatfire Join Date: 2003-03-31 Member: 15091Members
    edited January 2005
    Between edititing, rewriting, and adding on over time, probably between 10-20 hours. Which is spread out over the course of quite a few weeks. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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