Ns_argus backstory

CyonProCyonPro Join Date: 2002-02-02 Member: 154Members
in Fan-Fiction Forum
Well, my mapping skill seems to have left me for the moment, so I have decided to start building the backstory that goes with my upcoming map, NS_Argus.

I have finished the intro piece, just to give you guys a taste of the story's style, and also to find out if I've made any mistakes, technically or plot-wise.

<a href="http://cyonpro.ballsun.com/ns/ns_argus.html" target="_blank">NS_Argus Backstory - by CyonPro</a>

More to come...
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  • JedisarJedisar Join Date: 2002-03-03 Member: 264Awaiting Authorization
    Nice job, Cyon...hrmn..a good mapper and a good writer..I feel so mediocre. <!--emo&:(--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/sad.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':('><!--endemo-->
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  • CyonProCyonPro Join Date: 2002-02-02 Member: 154Members
    Hey don't worry....mine will probably have alot less action in it....seeing as there's only going to be one action scene <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->
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  • JedisarJedisar Join Date: 2002-03-03 Member: 264Awaiting Authorization
    It's still very good. You'll be an Author one day..if you try to be.
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Curses MonsE.  Migrate them old posts already so I can get more glory!  <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->

    But really, Cyon, that's good.
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  • CyonProCyonPro Join Date: 2002-02-02 Member: 154Members
    Well it looks like for the moment, either my server is down, or my school's network is down, so the story will be inaccessible for a day or two...
    Not that anyone cares <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->
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  • JedisarJedisar Join Date: 2002-03-03 Member: 264Awaiting Authorization
    Huzzah! That means everyone has to read my series! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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  • pielemuispielemuis Join Date: 2002-01-25 Member: 72Members, NS1 Playtester
    i care Cyon, cuz you host my AVATAR!!!!!!!!!!
    btw the story is quite good, i think <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->
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  • GreedoGreedo Bounty Hunter Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 37Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    Well, it's a good start.  So far, I'd say it's far too short, but you must be building up to something, I'm sure.  A story doesn't need to be filled with action, though action is one thing that is strongly recommended for a good story.  I have no doubts that you'll give use the rest, single action scene and all, with writing as good as this one.
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