My Attempt At Occasional 'artwork'

aonomus

<div class="IPBDescription">Mr marine meets fade</div> Spent a while working on this, feedback would be appreciated

<img src='http://www.readyroom.org/aonomus/art/timetoevo7.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

neko1

Looks cool. Some big battles would look good :D

Redford

It is delicious, like bacon!

Omegaman

Not bad.

But if you could only adjust the models so their lighting corresponds better with their environment...

taboofires

The fade blends in reasonably well, but the marine is really throwing me off. It looks like he's floating in space instead of standing on the ground, despite the drop shadow.

hE4RT

shadow facing the wrong way.

DoZ3R

The lighting seems all wrong on the marine, not only that but he looks way too small, good job though, it really gives that "O POO" feeling off well..


HEHEHEHE i said poo <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

i worry about myself sometimes <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

RaVe

I'm going to agree with he4RT

The lights are directly on the sides of the Fade and alien, in front of you. It won't make sense if the shadows are moving towards the light XD

In short, make the light come towards the viewer not way.

Liku

Why's he holding the shotguns's stock like ther trigger's there?

Sky

Silly me, I almost posted "Nice screenshot......" <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

SinSpawn

the marine looks very out of place on that pic.

DOOManiac

Very good, however if you don't mind I have made a few improvements:

aonomus

What the...

DOOManiac

/me huggles aonomus :P

Zunni

lol... He's thinking of happy thoughts..

RaVe

Uhh...Peter 'Fade' Pan?

Made me laugh a bit....afterwards I was like WTH?!i!

Seph_Kimara

<!--QuoteBegin-DOOManiac+Sep 7 2004, 02:55 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DOOManiac @ Sep 7 2004, 02:55 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Very good, however if you don't mind I have made a few improvements: <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
You SO win. So much pwn.

Delarosa

unfortunatly, d00m can read my mind....

BloodySloth

Looks good, but the two figures are a lot sharper than the background, so they tend to stick out too much.

$0.02