Ns The Behemoth Platinum Is Out!
<div class="IPBDescription">In case you are wondering, its a fanfic</div> Thanks to the support of many who went to the fanfiction forums and helped me pinpoint my mistakes in my fanfiction. Thus, I have 're-created' NS The Behemoth with a new layout, format and basically, corrected every mistake I could find.
Sadly though, I may or may not be including The Scorpian That Hovars Without Flapping again as I had received some PMs telling me that including it was excessive to the story. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Anyway, read it now! And tell me if the old version or the Platinum version is better!
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Sadly though, I may or may not be including The Scorpian That Hovars Without Flapping again as I had received some PMs telling me that including it was excessive to the story. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Anyway, read it now! And tell me if the old version or the Platinum version is better!
<!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->