Monster - 25, 26

DeepShadowsDeepShadows Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">good time to start readin</div> action chapter complete, woo........ I am tired. Just makin a standout post for new reader persons --- I go die now as it is 6 am. ttfn
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  • PFCNublarPFCNublar Join Date: 2003-04-23 Member: 15792Members
    Sleep well. There is a typo in Chapter 25 that should be exit instead of exitos or however you spelled. It's in the part when the gorges were blocking off the exits of BioDome.

    Very nice pieces though. Cliffhangers kill children. End it soon with another Chapter!
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  • AlignAlign Remain Calm Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 5216Forum Moderators, Constellation
    edited January 2004
    EDIT: wrong thread, sorry...
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