Desert Planet

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  • StarchyStarchy Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15727Members, Constellation
    This really is a good read. Please write some more, then I have an excuse not to work. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> Keep it up.
  • P-KhanP-Khan Join Date: 2003-05-27 Member: 16776Members
    edited April 2004
    <u>Chapter VI</u>

    A metal door slided open, and in entered Fish, handcuffed, behind him, came two gaurds, armed with LMGs. "Stop now" said one of the guards, as he held the prisoners hand. The other one came behind, took away his cuffs, and kicked him on his knees. Fish fell down to the ground and smacked his face on the ground. Both guards went out laughing. "Hope you have fun here!"

    Slowly, Fish got up and looked around. It was a small room, about 5 by 5. There was just a toilet there with a mirror, and a small window, which allowed him to pass through.

    He put his head outside, and was suprised by a gust of wind. Looking down, he saw the top of some skyscrapers. The prison floated above the city of Home, which complicated escaping the place. He returned, and sat down, wondering what to do.

    As he was thinking, something began to shine on his face. When Fish looked, he saw that light was being reflected from the small mirror. It was then that he had an idea.

    He ripped of a piece of cloth from his shirt, and wraped it around his hand. His hand moved back, and was thrown against the mirror, breaking it. <i>Heh, I'll have bad luck now</i>. He got one of the shards, and hid it with the palm of his hand.

    "I'm not feeleing very well. Someone, please, help me!"

    Two guards came in, and the door closed behind them. The same that brought him. In the corner was Fish, throwing up. He had put his finger down his throught, and was now puking. One of the guards came close to him, to see what he could do. It was then that he had the opportunity to act.

    Fish turned and stabed the guard with the broken glass. The guard fell down on top of Fish as he removed it from the guards chest. All the other guard saw was his buddy falling down. Fish flunged the dieing man on top of his comrade, and then jumped on him. The man tried to pull the trigger of his LMG, but he was too slow. The glass was already inside his throat.

    Suddenly, something struck him. <i>What have I donw?</i>.

    He looked down to his hands. They were red. Blood red. Trembling, he looked to the bodies. Both of them incarnadined with blood, and with eyes full of fear. It was as though they could see the face of death as their skin and flesh were torn by this small piece of glass. <i>What have I done?</i> Fish was crying of shame, and began to say in a low voice a quote of his favourite writter "Will all great Neptune's ocean wash this blood clean from my hand? No, this my hand will rather the multitudinous seas in incarnadine, making the green one red"

    As he was weeping in his own sorrow, he heard something comming from the radio of one of the guards "John!? Come in! What's wrong?! Sensors indicate you are inside prison cell 0239-54! Come in!"

    More guards would come soon. He had to get out of there. He had to survive, he had to. Recomposing himself, he got up and went to the bodies. He closed the eyes of the two guards, and got one of the LMG. He searched the pockets, and found two extra clips and a key card.

    Fish opened the door, looke carefully outside, and carried on down a metal corridor.




    Cookie to who knows from where is the quote from Fish!! <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • CutterJoeCutterJoe Join Date: 2002-12-30 Member: 11594Members, Constellation
    Great start dude keep it comming.

    /me subscribes
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