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Renegade

<div class="IPBDescription">Tell me what you think of it</div>Feel free to post comments and feelings about my short story if you've read it.

JediYoshi

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<!--EDIT|Greedo386|Sep. 04 2002,20:32-->

Slycaster

Jed that was uncalled for entirely, he's just asking for a little feedback.  NOTHING is wrong with that.  However i think this post should be moved to fan-fic.  Sheesh jedi.

JediYoshi

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<!--EDIT|Greedo386|Sep. 04 2002,20:32-->

Sgt_X

I know you didn't mean it but your <i>tone</i> could of come across as condecending. 'specialy from someone who doesn't know your normal paterns.

Greedo

And yes, this does belong in Fan-Fiction.

Renegade

Feedback pls? P.S., The Thing for the Xbox ownz!