Monster, Part 18

DeepShadows

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nooby

Sorry dude all I get is-------Error cannot display this page.-------from your links.


Edit --hehe I can now connect, the site must have had to many reading downloading when I posted. Going reading.

Second edit.--Read it. I enjoyed it, now keep up the good work.

Parhelion

<a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=6&t=50695' target='_blank'>Previous comments of mine</a> <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

This chapter was great, can?t wait for the next.

<i>Edits: Damn link.</i>

DeepShadows

Thanks for the help Parhelion, that is exactly what I needed. The only thing you mentioned that isn't fixed yet is the "'classy.'" part. I believe it is propper grammer to put the period on the inside of the quotation if it ends the sentence.

Oh, and the reason you couldn't find the "sense-since" typo was because I changed it immedietly after reading about it. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> Thanks for the help! Glad you're enjoying it! I will um... give you chocolates. Maybe... no, I think I'll keep'm.

Thanks tho <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

Khaim

Great stuff, but some of the refferences and wrighting styles ya used were a little weird, and kinda hard to understand at times.

DeepShadows

such as? (just curious, so I know)

If you're reffering to the maxims and interludes bit, that will be explained in a later chapter. Sides, they were talking about in an earlier chapter. I'm surprised nobody's tried to look up what maxims and interludes 116 is yet. Feel free to post it here if you find out.

Parhelion

<!--QuoteBegin--DeepShadows+Oct 29 2003, 03:26 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DeepShadows @ Oct 29 2003, 03:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I'm surprised nobody's tried to look up what maxims and interludes 116 is yet. Feel free to post it here if you find out. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
<b>Maxims and Interludes: Friedrich Nietzsche</b>
116. The great epochs of our life are the occasions when we gain the courage to rebaptize our evil qualities as our best qualities.

I think Khaim may be referring to the interspersing of Chapter 17 with the Divine Comedy references (“Through me...” etc and “Abandon all hope...”), as well as the Latin prayer “Agnus dei qui tollis peccata mundi...” in an earlier chapter – I quite enjoyed them since I knew what they meant, but perhaps others who do not know them may not appreciate them as much.