Equal Existence

Mr_Radical_EdMr_Radical_Ed Join Date: 2002-09-05 Member: 1285Members
edited April 2003 in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">MRE's Own Fan Fic, Freshly Sqeezed</div> Well I like giving back to the community, especially if the community is one that I like. So I enjoy all these stories both from here and <a href='http://nsa.wideloader.com' target='_blank'>NSA</a>, and wanted to contribute.

I am gonna try to do these by chapter every week or sooner. For now.. we start with the prologue.
<a href='http://bellsouthpwp.net/a/_/a_guevar/NSfanfic/' target='_blank'>Check It Out!</a>
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    *w00t repeatedly*
    wow, looks like it's going to be an incredible story
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PM me as more chapters go up!
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  • Mr_Radical_EdMr_Radical_Ed Join Date: 2002-09-05 Member: 1285Members
    News Flash, Chapter 1, nearly seven pages of text, has just been finished. Work on chapter 2 is already in early development.
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  • CanadianWolverineCanadianWolverine Join Date: 2003-02-07 Member: 13249Members
    Very cool, you writing style is succint and cystal clear, not to mention that the site you put up is beatifully professional in its simplicity. While the story may not be "action packed" at the moment, it is terribly interesting, since you have decided wisely to focus on a core group of characters and develop them into characters we know and love or hate, but are generally interested in what happens to them next. Great start, I can't wait till you finish the next part. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Just something I noticed, 6th paragraph down, I think you meant seperatable to be inseperable, as in almost impossible to keep apart. Hope that helps.

    To anyone else thinking of writing a Natural Selection fan fiction story, this story is a good example of all the elements you need to make not just a good piece, but a absolutely freaking great piece.
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  • Mr_Radical_EdMr_Radical_Ed Join Date: 2002-09-05 Member: 1285Members
    Thanks for your comments. I forgot about correcting that word to inseperable. Questions and comments are highly encouraged.
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  • Lumberjack_WannabeLumberjack_Wannabe Join Date: 2003-03-11 Member: 14404Members, Constellation
    Just started reading some of it. Extremely detailed, and well though of. Can't wait for the next chapters.
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    I can hardly wait!!!!!
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    keep up the excellent work!
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  • Mr_Radical_EdMr_Radical_Ed Join Date: 2002-09-05 Member: 1285Members
    Its that time again. Chapter 2 up for consumption, and yes of course you can have extra sauce with that.
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    It is?
    where!
    *runs off and looks*
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