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Renegade
Old school Join Date: 2002-03-29 Member: 361Members
Old school Join Date: 2002-03-29 Member: 361Members
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Lt. Stark: Hang on guys, we're going to drop in 3...2...1... Contact.
Pvt. Romerez: Woo! Express elevator to hell, goin' down!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Ugh, oh god.
[Vomiting]
Pvt. Clark: Heh heh, let it all out Sarge, 'cause we ain't done yet!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Uhn, shouldn't have eatin those pancakes. Ugh.
Pvt. Meyers: I've gotta bad feeling about this mission...
Pvt. Clark: You say that about every mission.
Lt. Stark: Hold on to your breakfast guys; we're in for some chops.
[Rumbling]
Pvt. Romerez: Hah! Too late for Matthews!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Ugh, #### you Romerez.
Lt. Stark: We're approaching the landing zone, prepare to deploy.
2nd Lt. Gerro: APC prepped and ready to roll.
Lt. Stark: Roger... We've reached the landing zone, you guys are on your own from here.
Pvt. Colbern: Deploy APC.
2nd Lt. Gerro: APC deployed, heading for drop zone 1... Drop zone reached. This is your stop Alpha Team.
F. Sgt. Briggs: Okay team, lets move out!
Pvt. Romerez: I hear that!
PFC Salvonivich: Alpha Team has deployed, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, proceede to the forward Air-Lock and await orders.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
2nd Lt. Gerrp: Approaching drop zone 2... Drop zone reached, you know the drill Bravo team.
S. Sgt. Matthews: Okay Bravo team, lets go.
Cpl Shephard: Hell Yeah!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Stay sharp marines; the last team sent down here disapeared, we suspect that whatever got the colonists got them as well.
Cpl. Shephard: So this is another search and rescue mission?
2nd Lt. Gerro: Do you have a problem with that Corporal?
Cpl. Shephard: No Sir!
PFC Salvonivich: Sir, Alpha team has reached the forward Air-Lock, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, proceede through the forward Air-Lock until you reach medical, and keep your motion trackers on hand.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
Cpl. Shephard: Sir, Bravo Team has arrived at the rear Air-Lock, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt.: Bravo Team, proceede through the rear Air-Lock until you reach ops, and keep your motion trackers on hand.
Cpl. Shephard: Roger.
PFC Salvonivich: Sir, this Alpha Team, the Air-Lock door won't budge, it looks like it's been welded shut, please advise.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, use your power welders to open the Air-Lock door.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
Cpl. Shephard: This is Bravo Team, we have cleared the rear Air-Lock, proceeding to ops.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Affirmative Bravo Team, proceede with caution.
Cpl. Shephard: Roger.
PFC. Salvonivich: Sir, this is Alpha Team, we've cleared the forward Air-Lock, proceeding to medical.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Affirmative Alpha Team, proceede with caution.
PFC. Salvonivich: Roger.
Pvt. Clark: Damn, the lights are out.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Briggs, send one of your men down to Level 3, there sould be a tertiary power uplink in sub-section D.
F. Sgt. Briggs: Roger, Douglas; you know what to do.
Pvt. Douglas: Yes sir.
Pvt. Romerez: Jesus Christ, what happened here?
PFC Salvonivich: Looks like someone waged a war in here...
F. Sgt. Briggs: Come on people, keep it moving; we've got an objective to accomlish.
Cpl. Shephard: Holy #### on a stick...
Pvt. Clark: Woo, someone died.
S. Sgt. Matthews: Keep moving people, we havn't reached ops yet.
Pvt. Ericson: Sir, I'm picking up movement, 27 meters up.
S. Sgt. Matthews: What? Let me see that... Lieutenant, this is Bravo Team, we've got movement, multiple subjects, they're heading our way, please advise.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Briggs, is your team on Level 2?
F. Sgt. Briggs: Negative, we're all on Level 1, except Douglas.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Douglas, what's your 20?
Pvt. Douglas: I'm on Level 3, sub-section A.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Acknowledged, Matthews, send one of your men to investigaite.
S. Sgt. Matthews: Roger, Shephard; you know what to do.
Cpl. Shephard: Yes Sir... This is Corporal Shephard of the TSA Marine Corps, identify yourself, now... I repeat, identi - who the hell - oh ####!
[Gunfire]
S. Sgt. Matthews: Shephard, hold your fire!
Cpl. Shephard: It ain't me sarge!
[Gunfire]
S. Sgt. Matthews: Well then who's shooting then?!
Cpl. Shephard: I don't know!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Get your men out of there now, Matthews!
[Gunfire]
S. Sgt. Matthews: What about Shephard?!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Now sergeant!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Yes Sir... Fall back!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Clark: What about Shephard?!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Fall back Private!
Pvt. Clark: Yes Sir.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Bravo Team, rendevous with Alpha Team in medical.
S Sgt. Matthews: Yes Sir.
PFC Salvonivich: Alpha Team has arrived at medical, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, set up a parameter around medical, Bravo team was attacked by an unidentified hostile force and is heading your way, so keep sharp.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
Pvt. Douglas: This is Douglas, I've found the tertiary power uplink, please advise.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Okay listen up Douglas; you don't have much time, there should be a numerical key-pad to the left of the uplink, on it I want you to press 6-5-5-9.
Pvt. Douglas: Uh, the code isn't working Sir.
2nd Lt. Gerro: What?
Pvt. Douglas: The code Sir, it's not working.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Try it again
Pvt. Douglas: I've tried it 3 times Sir, it's not working.
2nd Lt. Gerro: ####, alright, break the pannel open with the butt of your rifle.
Pvt. Douglas: Done.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Okay, you should see a red an blue striped wire, and white wire.
Pvt. Douglas: I see them.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Okay, connect them, the proceede to medical on the double Private!
Pvt. Douglas: Yes Sir!
2nd Sgt. Matthews: This is Bravo team, we've reached medical, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Roger Bravo team, I want you to help Alpha team set up a parameter around medical.
Cpl. Shephard: This is Shephard I'm at [Static] I'm going to access the [Static] and find out [Static] the Hell happened here!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Negative Corporal, retreat to mediacal, I say again, retreat to medical!
Cpl. Shephard: Yes Sir, pro- [Static]
F. Sgt. Briggs: What the Hell?!?! [Gunfire] Sir! [Gunfire] We're under attack!
2nd Lt. Gerro: By who?!
F. Sgt. Briggs: I don't know! [Gunfire] But they're not human! [Gunfire]
Pvt. Clark: What are these things?!?!
[Gunfire]Pvt. Romerez: Oh this is loco, man!
[Gunfire]
PFC Salvonivich: #### this ####! I'm outta here!
[Gunfire]
F. Sgt. Briggs: Get the Hell back here, Private! [Screaming] Private? PRIVATE!!! Sir, they got Salvonivich!
2nd Lt. Gerro: ######! Alright, get your men outta there, now!
F. Sgt. Briggs: Negative, negative! [Gunfire] We're pinned down, we can't [Unknown Noise] ####! [Gunfire]
Pvt. Romerez: I could use some help over here, muchacho's!
2nd. Lt. Gerro: Get outta th-
*ERROR* Unknown Soldier: I'll take care of this, Lieutenant.
2nd. Lt. Gerro: Sir... But I thought-
*ERROR* Unknown Soldier: Don't worry; I'll get your men out of there
2nd. Lt. Gerro: Good luck, Sir. Okay people, Listen up! I want you to keep fighting until reinforcments arrive, then get your ##### back here!
F. Sgt. Briggs: Understood! Alright men, you heard the man; keep you mouthes shut and your guns blazing!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Romerez: This is loco, man! We're all gonna die!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Davis: What the hell are these things m- [Unknown Noise] Holy ####! [Gunfire] Get away from me you fr- [Unknown Noise] GAAAAAARGH!!!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Clark: Davis! Sir, they got- [Unknown Noise] GAAAAAARGH!!!
2nd Lt. Gerro: God-######! Get your men outta there Sergeant!
F. Sgt. Briggs: Easier said than done Lieutenant!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Douglas: This is Douglas, I'm with Shephard, we're on or way outta this Hell-hole!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Roger, move your ##### gentlemen, we're evacuating!
Pvt. Douglas: Roger, Sir!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Listen up men, I n - [Unidentified Noise] ####! I - GAAAAAAGH!
*ERROR*: Feed from recording device has been cut. [WND/INCAP/DTH?] [Recording ended at 15:48:22]
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Lt. Stark: Hang on guys, we're going to drop in 3...2...1... Contact.
Pvt. Romerez: Woo! Express elevator to hell, goin' down!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Ugh, oh god.
[Vomiting]
Pvt. Clark: Heh heh, let it all out Sarge, 'cause we ain't done yet!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Uhn, shouldn't have eatin those pancakes. Ugh.
Pvt. Meyers: I've gotta bad feeling about this mission...
Pvt. Clark: You say that about every mission.
Lt. Stark: Hold on to your breakfast guys; we're in for some chops.
[Rumbling]
Pvt. Romerez: Hah! Too late for Matthews!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Ugh, #### you Romerez.
Lt. Stark: We're approaching the landing zone, prepare to deploy.
2nd Lt. Gerro: APC prepped and ready to roll.
Lt. Stark: Roger... We've reached the landing zone, you guys are on your own from here.
Pvt. Colbern: Deploy APC.
2nd Lt. Gerro: APC deployed, heading for drop zone 1... Drop zone reached. This is your stop Alpha Team.
F. Sgt. Briggs: Okay team, lets move out!
Pvt. Romerez: I hear that!
PFC Salvonivich: Alpha Team has deployed, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, proceede to the forward Air-Lock and await orders.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
2nd Lt. Gerrp: Approaching drop zone 2... Drop zone reached, you know the drill Bravo team.
S. Sgt. Matthews: Okay Bravo team, lets go.
Cpl Shephard: Hell Yeah!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Stay sharp marines; the last team sent down here disapeared, we suspect that whatever got the colonists got them as well.
Cpl. Shephard: So this is another search and rescue mission?
2nd Lt. Gerro: Do you have a problem with that Corporal?
Cpl. Shephard: No Sir!
PFC Salvonivich: Sir, Alpha team has reached the forward Air-Lock, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, proceede through the forward Air-Lock until you reach medical, and keep your motion trackers on hand.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
Cpl. Shephard: Sir, Bravo Team has arrived at the rear Air-Lock, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt.: Bravo Team, proceede through the rear Air-Lock until you reach ops, and keep your motion trackers on hand.
Cpl. Shephard: Roger.
PFC Salvonivich: Sir, this Alpha Team, the Air-Lock door won't budge, it looks like it's been welded shut, please advise.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, use your power welders to open the Air-Lock door.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
Cpl. Shephard: This is Bravo Team, we have cleared the rear Air-Lock, proceeding to ops.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Affirmative Bravo Team, proceede with caution.
Cpl. Shephard: Roger.
PFC. Salvonivich: Sir, this is Alpha Team, we've cleared the forward Air-Lock, proceeding to medical.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Affirmative Alpha Team, proceede with caution.
PFC. Salvonivich: Roger.
Pvt. Clark: Damn, the lights are out.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Briggs, send one of your men down to Level 3, there sould be a tertiary power uplink in sub-section D.
F. Sgt. Briggs: Roger, Douglas; you know what to do.
Pvt. Douglas: Yes sir.
Pvt. Romerez: Jesus Christ, what happened here?
PFC Salvonivich: Looks like someone waged a war in here...
F. Sgt. Briggs: Come on people, keep it moving; we've got an objective to accomlish.
Cpl. Shephard: Holy #### on a stick...
Pvt. Clark: Woo, someone died.
S. Sgt. Matthews: Keep moving people, we havn't reached ops yet.
Pvt. Ericson: Sir, I'm picking up movement, 27 meters up.
S. Sgt. Matthews: What? Let me see that... Lieutenant, this is Bravo Team, we've got movement, multiple subjects, they're heading our way, please advise.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Briggs, is your team on Level 2?
F. Sgt. Briggs: Negative, we're all on Level 1, except Douglas.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Douglas, what's your 20?
Pvt. Douglas: I'm on Level 3, sub-section A.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Acknowledged, Matthews, send one of your men to investigaite.
S. Sgt. Matthews: Roger, Shephard; you know what to do.
Cpl. Shephard: Yes Sir... This is Corporal Shephard of the TSA Marine Corps, identify yourself, now... I repeat, identi - who the hell - oh ####!
[Gunfire]
S. Sgt. Matthews: Shephard, hold your fire!
Cpl. Shephard: It ain't me sarge!
[Gunfire]
S. Sgt. Matthews: Well then who's shooting then?!
Cpl. Shephard: I don't know!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Get your men out of there now, Matthews!
[Gunfire]
S. Sgt. Matthews: What about Shephard?!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Now sergeant!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Yes Sir... Fall back!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Clark: What about Shephard?!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Fall back Private!
Pvt. Clark: Yes Sir.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Bravo Team, rendevous with Alpha Team in medical.
S Sgt. Matthews: Yes Sir.
PFC Salvonivich: Alpha Team has arrived at medical, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, set up a parameter around medical, Bravo team was attacked by an unidentified hostile force and is heading your way, so keep sharp.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
Pvt. Douglas: This is Douglas, I've found the tertiary power uplink, please advise.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Okay listen up Douglas; you don't have much time, there should be a numerical key-pad to the left of the uplink, on it I want you to press 6-5-5-9.
Pvt. Douglas: Uh, the code isn't working Sir.
2nd Lt. Gerro: What?
Pvt. Douglas: The code Sir, it's not working.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Try it again
Pvt. Douglas: I've tried it 3 times Sir, it's not working.
2nd Lt. Gerro: ####, alright, break the pannel open with the butt of your rifle.
Pvt. Douglas: Done.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Okay, you should see a red an blue striped wire, and white wire.
Pvt. Douglas: I see them.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Okay, connect them, the proceede to medical on the double Private!
Pvt. Douglas: Yes Sir!
2nd Sgt. Matthews: This is Bravo team, we've reached medical, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Roger Bravo team, I want you to help Alpha team set up a parameter around medical.
Cpl. Shephard: This is Shephard I'm at [Static] I'm going to access the [Static] and find out [Static] the Hell happened here!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Negative Corporal, retreat to mediacal, I say again, retreat to medical!
Cpl. Shephard: Yes Sir, pro- [Static]
F. Sgt. Briggs: What the Hell?!?! [Gunfire] Sir! [Gunfire] We're under attack!
2nd Lt. Gerro: By who?!
F. Sgt. Briggs: I don't know! [Gunfire] But they're not human! [Gunfire]
Pvt. Clark: What are these things?!?!
[Gunfire]Pvt. Romerez: Oh this is loco, man!
[Gunfire]
PFC Salvonivich: #### this ####! I'm outta here!
[Gunfire]
F. Sgt. Briggs: Get the Hell back here, Private! [Screaming] Private? PRIVATE!!! Sir, they got Salvonivich!
2nd Lt. Gerro: ######! Alright, get your men outta there, now!
F. Sgt. Briggs: Negative, negative! [Gunfire] We're pinned down, we can't [Unknown Noise] ####! [Gunfire]
Pvt. Romerez: I could use some help over here, muchacho's!
2nd. Lt. Gerro: Get outta th-
*ERROR* Unknown Soldier: I'll take care of this, Lieutenant.
2nd. Lt. Gerro: Sir... But I thought-
*ERROR* Unknown Soldier: Don't worry; I'll get your men out of there
2nd. Lt. Gerro: Good luck, Sir. Okay people, Listen up! I want you to keep fighting until reinforcments arrive, then get your ##### back here!
F. Sgt. Briggs: Understood! Alright men, you heard the man; keep you mouthes shut and your guns blazing!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Romerez: This is loco, man! We're all gonna die!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Davis: What the hell are these things m- [Unknown Noise] Holy ####! [Gunfire] Get away from me you fr- [Unknown Noise] GAAAAAARGH!!!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Clark: Davis! Sir, they got- [Unknown Noise] GAAAAAARGH!!!
2nd Lt. Gerro: God-######! Get your men outta there Sergeant!
F. Sgt. Briggs: Easier said than done Lieutenant!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Douglas: This is Douglas, I'm with Shephard, we're on or way outta this Hell-hole!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Roger, move your ##### gentlemen, we're evacuating!
Pvt. Douglas: Roger, Sir!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Listen up men, I n - [Unidentified Noise] ####! I - GAAAAAAGH!
*ERROR*: Feed from recording device has been cut. [WND/INCAP/DTH?] [Recording ended at 15:48:22]
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Comments
believe me I saw the movie hundreds of times..
...but I'm old and I have my eccentric reasons. <!--emo&:p--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'><!--endemo-->
Looks good tho.
Next time you should maybe try and use textformating to make reading easier, for example bold typos if the comander speaks.
I also would argue against "please advise" - Sure, they're a good team and following orders, but highly trained TSA forces ought to be a little more autonomous than that.
Yeah, I like to b!tch. Overall, good stuff. (:
Pvt. Romerez: Woo! Express elevator to hell, goin' down!
Pvt. Meyers: I've gotta bad feeling about this mission...
Pvt. Clark: You say that about every mission.
Lt. Stark: Hold on to your breakfast guys; we're in for some chops.
[Rumbling]
Lt. Stark: We're approaching the landing zone, prepare to deploy.
2nd Lt. Gerro: APC prepped and ready to roll.
Lt. Stark: Roger... We've reached the landing zone, you guys are on your own from here.
Pvt. Colbern: Deploy APC.
2nd Lt. Gerro: APC deployed, heading for drop zone 1... Cpl. Shephard: So this is another search and rescue mission?
2nd Lt. Gerro: Do you have a problem with that Corporal?
Cpl. Shephard: No Sir!
Pvt. Ericson: Sir, I'm picking up movement, 27 meters up.
S. Sgt. Matthews: What? Let me see that... Lieutenant, this is Bravo Team, we've got movement, multiple subjects, they're heading our way, please advise.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
Well, I just edited it a little so we could all see the stuff directly out of aliens <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:p--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'><!--endemo--> I just watched the movie, lol, but give it another shot please, it was still enjoyable to read.