The Past.

Hatred

<div class="IPBDescription">A little history on the Space Marines</div> Ok I am attaching my story, it is 'bigger' than allowed. Not in terms of text but I put spaces between speaking and such so it just takes up a lot of room physically. Anyway I hate doing this because no one will read the damn things if they have to actually DL it. Most of the time some still do. Anyway for those of you who actually do read it enjoy, I threw it together in about 30 minutes or less but it should still be pretty good just shorter then I usually do.

Gwahir

I read it, certainly not mainstream NS. Being that they have what seemed a very large ship which the TSA wouldn't have funds for, and that this is mentioned as history where the transn system authority was originally created as a group to police intersystem matters. Though they obviously use TSA technology, plus some embellishment (redemption technology for marines).

In terms of the story over all, while it held a fascination, some things felt all too trite, and that's as far as I'll go on that matter.

final word: keep writing