My first Fan-fiction...
"Are those vents welded ncie and tight MARINE?" "Yes sir" i replyed, tired from the landing. I looked around out the windows, and i saw nothing but a blinding blizzard raging down on us. This place was so cold and uninviting. I hated it.
"Commander, any further orders?" "No soldier, go get some rest" the comm said. I went into a corner and set up my sleeping-bag. "God i hate this place" i said to myself, And tried to fall asleep. I had trouble. I knew something bad was going to happen tomorrow.
I awoke to see the commander dropping heavy armor for everyone that was on the mission. "Gentlemen, you are going to go on a mission" he said, his voice booming in my ear. "Squad one will all pick up a plating of heavy armor, and im not giving it to you becuase i like you. Im giving it to you becuase the tempature out there are -120 degrees Fahrenheit. So without it, you will FREEZE to death!"
The comm sent a squad of men out to rondevouz with a supply convoy and escort it backto the base. The rest ofthe people left behind will stay and defend the base. The minute i set foot outside of the door, i new something terrible was going to happen. "Allright men, Movout!" and with the commandes orders, we stuck together all the way to our waypoint.
-To be continued-
Tell me what you think! Should i keep on goign or stop right here?
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