Dear all, this is my first piece in the natural selection universe. I was inspired to write in it due to a mixture of the existing story, my own experiences and need, and in part, the inappropriate portrayal of the TSA in most of the fanfics here.
I have tried my best to corellate my story with what currently exists in the Natural Selection canon, i.e. the World section of the website.
Please critique my work. There will always be need for improvement. I may rewrite parts of the story at the later date, as I feel that in my urge to rush to the meat of the story (human vs kharaa), I have skipped over much of the backstory.
If you find any discrepancies with the dating, or facts from the NS universe, please let me know as well. I'd also like to add technical details in future.
This is of course, very much, a work still in progress.
Without further ado, I present to you a portion of the first chapter of NS: Origin.