This story is an account, told in the first person, of one of the missions our clan has been sent on. The names used are all names of clanmembers (current, inactive or past). I have their approval to use them in my story, as well as the DFA clan name. The story is at least a third finished though it's far too large to house here. If you're interested in viewing it, please go to:http://www.dfaclan.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1110
You may post comments as replies to this thread, or you may post them on our clan page at:http://www.dfaclan.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1111
Constructive criticism is very welcome. This is my first, true science-fiction piece as I usually write fantasy. If you see something that looks out of place or would like to suggest additions/changes in general, also feel free to post. You may also email me directly:
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