all updates will be listed here
part 22 is posted. read it athttp://nsmonster.tripod.com/part22.html
sorry this took so long. tis nearing christmas and all..... I might tweak this chapter slightly later on, but I'm not sure yet. Please tell me what you think... even the minute likes/dislikes. Always glad to get feedback --
23 will be up hopefully sometime soon. It's half done as it is.